Communications to Move Forward

Clear thinking.Plain language.Words that help people understand.

I work with mission-driven organizations and leaders to clarify what they want to say and to express it with care and precision. My focus is on clear thinking, plain language, and communication that reflects purpose and values.

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Dense official language, rewritten the way a person would say it.

01 · Sample entry

Out of Office

Original

Please be advised that the undersigned will be unavailable for the duration of the period indicated and will respond to correspondence at the earliest opportunity upon return.

Plain

I'm away until the 14th. I'll write back when I'm in.

02 · Sample entry

Eligibility Letter

Original

Pursuant to the determination rendered herein, your application has not been approved at this time due to a failure to satisfy the documentation requirements outlined in the enclosed notice.

Plain

We can't approve your application yet. We're missing some paperwork. See the list of what we need.

03 · Sample entry

Meeting Follow-Up

Original

Action items were socialized with stakeholders to ensure alignment going forward, with bandwidth to be assessed prior to the next touchpoint.

Plain

We told everyone what we decided. Before we meet again, we'll check who has time.

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Every project starts with listening. I ask the questions that surface what you really need to say — not just what you think you should.

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